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For every women there comes a time to wonder
Similar questions about the man holding their hand.
Yet I worry, will you look at me with such devotion
When my eyes are wrinkled from years of emotion?

Will it take a world you can’t escape?
Or a promise you have to keep?
To make it so you have the courage
To love, without me having to encourage?

Plenty of beauties come and go but
Will you have the courage and patience
To say that I am you’re one and only?
Or shall we both be, when old, lonely?

Shall you have the courage to take my
Hand and lead me on through our life?
From this fleeting romance to the alter,
Our children to our deaths, and never falter?

I have the courage I know I do,
To swear my life away to loving you.
Do you have the courage dear?
To be here for many a year?

I love you, which will never change.
I am willing to spend my life with you.
You have sworn your commitment to me.
You say you love me, the rest is meant to be.
©2008-2009 ~adurna-rose
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Wrote this awhile.
Perfect with Valentine's day and all of that. Kind of fun. Different from my usual.

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:iconfangedlizard:
kraig may be the one for you best of luck sorrry for any wounds I may have caused

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Never Mess With a Panalwalking Duck, Fred
:iconadurna-rose:
What wounds have you caused. And I thought I mentioned not to read my stuff. I don't want people who acutally know me to read my stuff. Fopr obvious reasons. Besides, the sutff I write nowadays is crap anyways.

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"If you can dream - and not make dreams your master;"-Kipling

[link] Aragorn is Mine! ha ha Bishie Stalker club rocks!
:iconashligh:
The title made me think of a battle ground, and now that I read it, "All is fair in love and war."

I enjoyed reading this. Not to be sexist, but it's very often that the woman is more courageous in love than the man is.

I wish I could say more, but I don't know how to put my thoughts into words.

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Thank you to ~RadRock for my avatar.
:iconadurna-rose:
Woman arent necessarily more courageous, though I will agree that it does seem like the woman is willing to risk alot more. I'm glad you liked it. I wish I could have done it better, I scuk at ryhming.

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"If you can dream - and not make dreams your master;"-Kipling

[link] Aragorn is Mine! ha ha Bishie Stalker club rocks!
:iconfangedlizard:
sorry just lost my self in poems at two in the morning

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Never Mess With a Panalwalking Duck, Fred
:iconadurna-rose:
How much did you read? Some stuff I dont mind, in those I'll put a * for you, but alot of these are personal and I don't want you reading them. This is my outlet, I don't have to be scared about what I put on here. Please tell me what you did read though that way we are on the same page.
btw, I'm home and I keep meaning to call you but keep forgetting. Feel free to call me.

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"If you can dream - and not make dreams your master;"-Kipling

[link] Aragorn is Mine! ha ha Bishie Stalker club rocks!
:iconfangedlizard:
I only read the ones that I commented on and the one you showed ne

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Never Mess With a Panalwalking Duck, Fred
:iconadurna-rose:
ok. Thats fine. You just scared me for a second there. This place is kind of my outlet. Its for only me to know. No offense, but you don't want to know what I'm thinking sometimes.

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"If you can dream - and not make dreams your master;"-Kipling

[link] Aragorn is Mine! ha ha Bishie Stalker club rocks!
:iconfangedlizard:
and what every one is thinking is exactly what I aam Thring to find out ... but I will back off of you and your friends

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Never Mess With a Panalwalking Duck, Fred

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